I want to be a better writer. (TW:Abuse in an example of my writing, so you can skip over that.)
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I want to be a better writer. (TW:Abuse in an example of my writing, so you can skip over that.)
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Posted 2023-08-21 11:08:12
I love writing, but I feel like a suck at it... Soooo please help!! I'll put some stuff I have written before!! TW: Abuse "Sure Sorrin, I'll stay out here, do you promise to come back?" I ask skeptical. He gives me this look as if I'm crazy to even think he wouldn't, and I smile a bit. "Alright, love you Sorrin, be back soon!" After a couple seconds of just looking at each other, he just nods and wipes his sweat away. "I'll be back in a bit, bye.." He sounds nervous to even leave, but I don't push it on him to explain. He leaves and after a while it starts to become dark. 'Where is he?' I ask myself, and I get up and I look over to the house, the lights are still on, yet no one is getting me. 'Sorrin told me to stay here…But it's getting late and I'm tired of waiting.' I know I shouldn't go, but I decided to go anyway. I slowly creep up to the house, and the windows curtains are open, I can see figures though the window as I slowly get closer and closer. As I finally make it under the window, I quickly poke my head up to see who, and what's going on. My eyes widen and my breath gets heavy at the sight, my hands start to tremble a bit as I see what's unfolding before my eyes, and I just stay frozen…I don't even scream. They are beating Sorrins bareback with a wooden stick, his back is already black and blue, at this point even some blood dripping down. The worst part, Sorrins face is scrunched up, all wet from his tears. I can't hear his screams cause his mouth is ducked taped shut. I can hear the muffled sounds of my foster parents yelling, and I just stare and watch. I finally get the courage to run in and stop them. My face wet with my own tears. I quickly open the door and I run into the room crying. "Stop! Please! Leave Sorrin alone!" I yell, tears streaming down my face, my eyes zone in at Sorrin's terrified face looking at me, as if saying 'What have you done?'. Mr.Kelmer looks at me right as he was taking his stick back, about to land another blow, on my brother's back. Sorrin tries to yell something to me, but it's muffled with the tape. "Please! Leave my brother alone!" I scream loudly, and my legs give out and I fall to the floor, Mr.Kelmer walks over to me before he raises his hand. "Don't you dare speak to me like that! I'm looking after you, caring for you, providing for you, and you disrespect me?" His hand hits my face. Heres some more writing I have done Nixies tense body, slowly backs away from the huge creature. Her hands shaking at the sight. The only thing really reassuring her is the fact that her team is right behind her. She walks backwards, eye locked with the creature. "Just a bit farther Nixie...Come on... You got this." One of her team mates calls out. their voice is soft and low. They are also trying not to scare the creature a head of them. As Nixie almost reaches her team mate, she trips over her own shoes. Making a huge noise as she plummets to the ground. Nixie and het team mates eyes widen in fear. (I have some more if yall want some more!! Also I have no idea if this is my best, but if I find any better ones, ill send them!! c: ) |
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Posted 2023-08-21 11:56:59
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