Design My Fox Girl!🦊20GC Reward [CLOSED]

Sent the wrong link the first time - whoops! https://www.wolvden.com/wardrobe/1275325?eyJ2IjoiZGVmYXVsdCIsImIiOiIxMDkiLCJlIjoiMyIsIm4iOiIxNCIsImMiOiI4IiwicyI6IjkiLCJrIjoiIiwieCI6W251bGwsIiIsIkJlaWdlIE1hcmJsZWQgVW5kZXJzIiwiQ3JlYW0gVHJpbSIsIkJsYWNrIFNtdWRnZSBIZWF2eSIsIlJlZCBQb2ludHMiLCJIb25leSBTaGFkZWQiLCJUdWZmIENhcGUgVGlja2luZyIsIkJsYWNrIExpbWJzIiwiV2hpdGUgVGFpbCBUaXAiLCJXaGl0ZSBUb2VzIl0sIm8iOltudWxsLCIxMDAiLCIxMDAiLCIxMDAiLCIxMDAiLCI0MCIsIjIwIiwiMTUiLCI3NSIsIjEwMCIsIjgwIl0sImQiOltudWxsLCIiLCIiLCIiLCIiLCIiLCIiLCIiLCIiLCIiLCIiXSwiYSI6IjI0IiwibSI6IiJ9

@Starling hmmm... i don't think u gave me the right link, that's the design that's currently on her! Also for future reference, please show ur design on her as an adult rather than a pup

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@Starling i love the faux auburn with the black smudge and the red points mixed! its a really nice effect, try lowering the opacity on the black tho? it looks really muddy on the legs (the face looks fine tho). the white tail tip is a nice touch! although the red tail is a bit jarring, maybe use a black rump mark to see if that will help it match up with the rest of the reddish parts?

@areot lots of issues with muddiness. my suggestions: lower the opacity on the black smudge, increase opacity on red points. I don't like the white cheek fluff in this design. i really want the reddish tint of the base to shine in this design, so try not to muddy it or cover it up so much :) tysm for ur submission!

How’s this? wolvden.com

Edit: here’s attempt 3! wolvden.com Sadly theres not much I can do to darken the forehead since I can’t move the existing markings around.

@areot i like the white blaze, i do not like the black butcher. 

@Starling wow! those edits u made definitely stepped up this design! i really love where its going! look for a marking to darken up the top of her head a bit!

next time tho, edit ur original comments with a new design instead of making a new comment! the only time u should leave extra comments is when ur pinging me to look at the updated design :)

Edited my design:

• Replaced dark brown marks with black
• Bumped up opacity on red points
• Lowered opacity on urijao to aim for a touch of pink

@Syvenien i tried opening the link but it said "invalid code" D: 

Ohh no. This is what I get for attempting on mobile. I'll try to recreate it and fix the link once I am up/on a comp.