troll's lore commissions <3 (closed)

troll's lore commissions <3 (closed)
Posted 2022-07-12 18:56:54 (edited) #794122 hello friends, i'm troll <3 i do lore commissions! i'll be using my own pack lore and wolves as examples for the pricing below, but first, some things to know ::D -all prices below are guidelines! i am willing to negotiate but please stay in that range. -pricing is different depending on the type of lore i'll be writing ::p -no heavy gore or nsfw, sorry! -you may edit my writing after ya pay, e.i. changing names around, adding or omitting pieces etc. however, you will pay for the UNEDITED version, so if i write 400 words and ya take out 150, you'll still be paying for 400. -i do accept item payments, especially food or amusement -you must have credit somewhere, idc where. you can put a link to this thread or my user ID in your profile page, you can put it in your den, you can put it in a wolf's bio if i wrote it. i dont care just put credit somewhere please. -i reserve the right to refuse any comission now the pricing and examples! Short Bio: 50 >100 words, 3rd person, only major events, very vague descriptions. The least favorite pup of her mother's first litter, Shade was chased from her home as soon as she was weaned. She survived alone until adulthood, when she met Tala and formed her pack. Her unpredictable moods and tendency to lash out means that her pack fears her, but she is a capable and strong leader, nonetheless. Over time, she's grown increasingly paranoid, her mate being the only wolf she still truly trusts.Short Diary: 125 150-200 words, 1st or 3rd person, specific events in a time period, more vague descriptions. It's been nearly a quarter moon since I changed my fur. The very base of my being, which defines who I am, has been altered. I see now. I understand. The Change is a holy thing, it must be obeyed. Until it changes, at least. Until then, I will change, too, and my pack shall be a vessel for the Change. As such, our home should reflect this. My scouts to the south told me of a land suitable to my needs. I, myself, have ventured there, and found it very much to my liking. The swamps contain the opposite powers of life and death, more so than any other land I have seen. Not only this, but the swamplands are home to all different kinds of life and death. It is perfect. It will be perfect still, even when it changes. My children protest, and they say the rest of the pack is against it as well, but I must not falter. I shall lead them to the swamps, and there we will thrive.Long Diary: 175 250-300 words, 1st or 3rd person, specific events in a time period, more specific descriptions. The pack is thriving. Just as expected, of course. Winter will be upon us soon; we have more than enough food to last us, as well as more hunting parties to bring in food. We've been running short on toys for the young ones, but since my new litter has been born, I can search the land more easily. I chose to bear pups from a male with my furs, but unfortunately none of the pups share it. Rot has taken to them well, considering the male was not from our pack. He's taken a liking to one pup in particular, which I have named Decay, in honor of him. Only a few days old, and she's already so eager to run. Perhaps I'll let her leave once she's weaned. Storm and Minnow have been mated, as have Algae and Dark. They are both expecting in a moon cycle or so, and Minnow is very excited to have an apprentice. He is an excellent herbalist; he reads signs of the Change without assistance now, and is quite skilled in healing and herbalism, though he is still impatient. Storm's Soul must be stronger before she can bear any pups worthy of the Herbalist title. Dove is the only remnant of our old pack remaining. He is no longer our Prince, however. A young male, Luno, is set to replace him once he matures. Dove is beginning to age and has requested to be mated to Historian Smudge. I will allow it, if only to keep them both placated. Other than this, things have been relatively quiet. I am content, and so is the pack, and we shall remain so until that Changes.Pack Lore: 1/word, -50 No word limit, 3rd person, specific major events in a time period, spans across entire pack, somewhat vague descriptions. Shade was chased from her home as a young adolescent. Unwanted by her mother, she was forced to wander. Eventually she came upon some empty grasslands, unoccupied by local packs. Here she came across a black she-wolf, Tala. Tala introduced her to the lands, and even helped her find her mate, Rot. At the end of Year 1, Shade's obsession with the Change had begun to take hold. In the name of the Change, she decreed that the pack would travel far south of their grassland home, to the vast swamps. She claimed that between the deathly stillness and the healing flow of the water, Change itself resided. The pack soon starved, and not even a moon after arriving Shade led the pack northeast to river-filled forests, where Change lived alongside plentiful prey, rather than in place of it. Because of this grave error in judgement, the pack began to whisper among themselves. Whispers of an uprising, to bring a new leader. Shade caught wind of this, and made a decision. At the beginning of Year 4, Shade's desperate need for Change spread to the wolves in her pack. She forced all of them- except her mate and the Prince- to find new homes, even chasing her own children from her lands. From this nearly blank slate, she began the pack anew. She claimed the pack had grown stagnant, and so she had to purge it. By the summer of Year 4, the pack had only new faces. For now, I have no limit on how many I'll take at a time!	tism troll {trollself} #55407

Posted 2022-07-12 18:56:54 (edited)

#794122

hello friends, i'm troll <3

i do lore commissions! i'll be using my own pack lore and wolves as examples for the pricing below, but first, some things to know ::D

-all prices below are guidelines! i am willing to negotiate but please stay in that range.
-pricing is different depending on the type of lore i'll be writing ::p
-no heavy gore or nsfw, sorry!
-you may edit my writing after ya pay, e.i. changing names around, adding or omitting pieces etc. however, you will pay for the UNEDITED version, so if i write 400 words and ya take out 150, you'll still be paying for 400.
-i do accept item payments, especially food or amusement
-you must have credit somewhere, idc where. you can put a link to this thread or my user ID in your profile page, you can put it in your den, you can put it in a wolf's bio if i wrote it. i dont care just put credit somewhere please.
-i reserve the right to refuse any comission

now the pricing and examples!

Short Bio: 50 >100 words, 3rd person, only major events, very vague descriptions.
The least favorite pup of her mother's first litter, Shade was chased from her home as soon as she was weaned. She survived alone until adulthood, when she met Tala and formed her pack. Her unpredictable moods and tendency to lash out means that her pack fears her, but she is a capable and strong leader, nonetheless. Over time, she's grown increasingly paranoid, her mate being the only wolf she still truly trusts.Short Diary: 125 150-200 words, 1st or 3rd person, specific events in a time period, more vague descriptions.
It's been nearly a quarter moon since I changed my fur. The very base of my being, which defines who I am, has been altered. I see now. I understand. The Change is a holy thing, it must be obeyed. Until it changes, at least. Until then, I will change, too, and my pack shall be a vessel for the Change. As such, our home should reflect this. My scouts to the south told me of a land suitable to my needs. I, myself, have ventured there, and found it very much to my liking. The swamps contain the opposite powers of life and death, more so than any other land I have seen. Not only this, but the swamplands are home to all different kinds of life and death. It is perfect. It will be perfect still, even when it changes. My children protest, and they say the rest of the pack is against it as well, but I must not falter. I shall lead them to the swamps, and there we will thrive.Long Diary: 175 250-300 words, 1st or 3rd person, specific events in a time period, more specific descriptions.
The pack is thriving. Just as expected, of course. Winter will be upon us soon; we have more than enough food to last us, as well as more hunting parties to bring in food. We've been running short on toys for the young ones, but since my new litter has been born, I can search the land more easily. I chose to bear pups from a male with my furs, but unfortunately none of the pups share it. Rot has taken to them well, considering the male was not from our pack. He's taken a liking to one pup in particular, which I have named Decay, in honor of him. Only a few days old, and she's already so eager to run. Perhaps I'll let her leave once she's weaned. Storm and Minnow have been mated, as have Algae and Dark. They are both expecting in a moon cycle or so, and Minnow is very excited to have an apprentice. He is an excellent herbalist; he reads signs of the Change without assistance now, and is quite skilled in healing and herbalism, though he is still impatient. Storm's Soul must be stronger before she can bear any pups worthy of the Herbalist title. Dove is the only remnant of our old pack remaining. He is no longer our Prince, however. A young male, Luno, is set to replace him once he matures. Dove is beginning to age and has requested to be mated to Historian Smudge. I will allow it, if only to keep them both placated. Other than this, things have been relatively quiet. I am content, and so is the pack, and we shall remain so until that Changes.Pack Lore: 1/word, -50 No word limit, 3rd person, specific major events in a time period, spans across entire pack, somewhat vague descriptions.
Shade was chased from her home as a young adolescent. Unwanted by her mother, she was forced to wander. Eventually she came upon some empty grasslands, unoccupied by local packs. Here she came across a black she-wolf, Tala. Tala introduced her to the lands, and even helped her find her mate, Rot.
At the end of Year 1, Shade's obsession with the Change had begun to take hold. In the name of the Change, she decreed that the pack would travel far south of their grassland home, to the vast swamps. She claimed that between the deathly stillness and the healing flow of the water, Change itself resided. The pack soon starved, and not even a moon after arriving Shade led the pack northeast to river-filled forests, where Change lived alongside plentiful prey, rather than in place of it.
Because of this grave error in judgement, the pack began to whisper among themselves. Whispers of an uprising, to bring a new leader. Shade caught wind of this, and made a decision. At the beginning of Year 4, Shade's desperate need for Change spread to the wolves in her pack. She forced all of them- except her mate and the Prince- to find new homes, even chasing her own children from her lands. From this nearly blank slate, she began the pack anew. She claimed the pack had grown stagnant, and so she had to purge it. By the summer of Year 4, the pack had only new faces.

For now, I have no limit on how many I'll take at a time!

tism troll {trollself}
#55407

Posted 2022-07-13 18:48:54

#794507

Reserving and subscribing. I'll be here soon.

SpookyStick(L-Off)
#72396

Posted 2022-08-06 13:58:40

#811763

Hi! Could you write a pack lore for my den? I can pm to talk about it!

UnknownMouse
#74990

Posted 2022-08-06 14:01:18

#811766

yes absolutely! i don't mind if you post here but if you prefer pms then feel free <3
please remember to give a brief synapses of what's happened in your lore, any important figures, how long you want it to be, and any important dates ^^

tism troll {trollself}
#55407

Posted 2022-08-06 14:51:15 (edited)

#811786

Ok so...

I want a pack lore and I want the beginning to start with Tala being my leads mother and raising fauna. So when Tala passes, fauna has to start her own pack. I would also like if it could have fauna as the runt of the litter Tala had, but all of her siblings left to start their own pack? The end doesn't really matter to me but if it ended with something like making the reader want more from the story. So kinda catchy idk lol. If you could add my wolf river in the story somewhere that would be cool! Sorry if this is confusing I would like if it had like 300-500 words. I Currently have 203 sc but I can complete some quests and get more soon :)

UnknownMouse
#74990

Posted 2022-08-06 14:59:23

#811788

Sounds good!
Do you have any setting preferences like what biome this happens in, the biome your pack is in, the season, etc.? And do you have anything in particular in mind for River or is it up to me what she does in the story?

tism troll {trollself}
#55407

Posted 2022-08-06 15:05:06

#811790

Winter in the tiaga bipme would be cool! It's up to you what she does, but she was a pupsitter and mentor before I made her immortal

UnknownMouse
#74990

Posted 2022-08-06 15:06:39

#811791

thanks! I should be able to start it later today and it should be done in a week or so. If it takes longer then feel free to give me a poke, chances are I got busy and forgot lol.

tism troll {trollself}
#55407

Posted 2022-08-06 15:10:23

#811792

No problem, of ot fits your time could you just give me little check ins? I like knowing how it's going lol. Also I'm guessing i pay after it's written? I think I just need like 200 more sc

UnknownMouse
#74990

Posted 2022-08-06 15:11:55

#811794

yes and yes, and if you'd like i can whip up a short summary of what I plan on doing and pm it to you so you can see if it's to your liking ^^

tism troll {trollself}
#55407

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