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pack lore help?

pack lore help?
Posted 2022-07-26 20:23:36
hi

i could use some help with my pack lore. 
pack lore


The Freezing winds howling down the Catskills Mountains carry the voices of the dead. , whispering to those who venture there. If no one is isn't specifically waiting for the sound of quiet voice to reach their ears. , they'll never be able to hear what the spirits have to say.

Magic , the first leader of the Noel Winter Eve pack , doesn't have patiently wait for her to know the presence of spirits there. She can feel them , smell them, and hear them.  To her they whispers words of encouragement , wisdom , and warnings.  the Spirits were mentors to Magic. Magic and the spirits have learned to work together and have become friends over the years.

written with help  with the writing  by Aggressive  # 9721 on discord and his wolvden account aggressive # 10024. 

^ i know not much of a pack lore. if you think it needs to be re started please let me know.

i don't have much of pack lore outside of the pack rules.
Magic has made the rules for the Noel Winter Eve pack. 

rule number one is that the Noel Winter Eve pack will always be lead by a female. the new alpha can choose the wolf that will be featured.

Flame , and the future breeding males will choose the next breeding male. 

both the new alpha and the new featured wolf will choose the next scouts.



each new Alpha and new featured wolf will have their own relationships.

the second rule is that the pack members can choose their own roles. 


so if any can help with the pack lore part.

if you have any ideas for the pack rules , that is fine too.

magicwhitewolf
#25645

Posted 2022-08-12 14:37:43
First thing's first, let me just quickly fix the grammar in those opening paragraphs.

The freezing winds howling down the Catskills Mountains carry the voices of the dead, whispering to those who venture there. If no one is specifically waiting for the sound of a quiet voice to reach their ears, they'll never be able to hear what the spirits have to say.

Magic, the first leader of the Noel Winter Eve pack, doesn't have to patiently wait to know the presence of spirits there. She can feel them, smell them, and hear them. To her, they whisper words of encouragement, wisdom, and warnings. The spirits are mentors to Magic. Magic and the spirits have learned to work together and have become friends over the years.

There, that was easy. Now on to the actual lore. The key to it is going to be Magic's origin and how she came to live in the Catskills. Was she born there? If not, then how did she get there? Is there some story about how or why she has second sight? Is there a reason why she wants all the Alphas after her to be female? What are her beliefs and values?

spotpc
#9204

Posted 2022-08-12 15:38:15
sorry about the grammer. 

Magic was my first wolf that i created.  so not sure where to start with her origin story.

she wasn't born in catskills mountains.  she moved there to start her own pack. 

thats the part i need help with.

haven't figured out her beliefs and values either.

as for all the alphas after her have to be female , her mother was the alpha of the pack she was born in.  she saw her mother was a strong leader for her pack , even after her mate died  ; which was Magic's father. 

its not that males don't make good leaders. 
her mother's spirit guardian was a female elephant. i know it doesn't make sense.

that's what i got so far.

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the reason i want all leaders after magic to be female . is because on lioden all the leaders of the pride are male. so i wanted a change of pace and having all female leaders. this is my decision outside of my pack lore on wolvden.

magicwhitewolf
#25645

Posted 2022-08-12 15:50:10
That's actually not a bad start. If Magic's mom was such a strong leader, then why did Magic leave? Does Magic have a spirit guarding too?

spotpc
#9204

Posted 2022-08-12 17:54:32
thanks. i just have trouble putting it together so it makes sense from a pack lore.

its not that Magic wanted to leave her parents pack. she wanted to take over her parents pack and be their next leader.

forgot to mention in my last post that Magic and her siblings were her parents last litter ; they were the only litter born in winter , month December.

anyway. her mother wanted her to take over , since she and her mate  were the alpha's of the pack. after her mate died. he died sometime after Magic and her siblings were adolescents.  don't get me wrong both of her parents wanted her to be the next leader of the pack . they both a vision that showed Magic had the potential to lead her own pack.

both her parents talked about the vision they saw. her parents had a wolf with a role called mage. the mage is the keeper of all things with magic , soccery , etc. she told them the vision  is true and that Magic will be great leader. the mage told them the Magic true potential of being leader will be shown if she can lead her own pack. 

with a sad heart as soon as Magic turned a year old , she set off to start her own pack.

for reasons unknown to her parents and Magic herself , she will be immortal.


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yes , i would need help to write this so it makes sense from a lore point of view. please feel free to give name suggestion for Magic's parents , siblings , other pack members , the mage. 

i know its a lot to read.

magicwhitewolf
#25645

Posted 2022-08-12 18:43:37
So starting her own pack was a trial by fire for Magic to prove her worthiness to return and take over leadership of her home pack. But did she ever return? Was she granted the immortality promised to her? Was her second sight only the beginning of her powers? Did she become a goddess? Does the pack she formed now worship her as their patron deity?

spotpc
#9204

Posted 2022-08-12 19:04:08
yes , Magic did return to her parents pack several times.  yes , just not sure how it was granted to her .

starting her own pack was a way for Magic to prove to other pack's that a female could lead a pack. the other wolf pack's that are around her parents territory don't believe a female can lead a pack. Magic did came back to her parents pack , and she did prove her self that she could take over thats when her parents pack joined with her own pack.

she did became a goddess when the second leader of the Noel Winter Eve pack took over.

her current pack worship her as their protector ,  mage, and deity.

what do you mean byWas her second sight only the beginning of her powers?

magicwhitewolf
#25645

Posted 2022-08-13 06:16:21
Second sight is a good power to have, especially when there are friendly spirits around to advise you. But did Magic gain other abilities as she got older or after she became a deity? Did her second sight get stronger?

spotpc
#9204

Posted 2022-08-13 06:51:11
her abilties are making wolves immortal , changing their base , eye color ,  bringing wolves back to life after they pass on..

just not sure what other abilitys she could have.

yes , her second sight got stronger.

magicwhitewolf
#25645

Posted 2022-08-13 07:08:52
Well, that's a great start! Your pack has a history, a purpose, and even a religion. Using all this, you can build a really good lore.

spotpc
#9204

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