Light VS. Darkness
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Posted 1 day ago (edited)
Sounds great! I hate it when people ask what my story is about because IDK where to start 
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 Memer Bear #8777 |
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Posted 1 day ago (edited)
thanks, I can copy the Entro if you would like to read it. |
 Shapeshifter the goldwing #129135 |
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Posted 1 day ago
I'm the same way but it's that I don't know which story to talk aboutxx XD |
 Steel #145791 |
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Posted 1 day ago
pick your most recent one |
Memer Bear #8777 |
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Posted 1 day ago
The most recent one is what I call project spring-roll It's about a genetic scientist and a girl who got themselves stuck in an alternative form of their world filled with monsters (like the upside down in stranger things or something) And spring roll(the girl) gets modified over and over again so she can survive while doing the tasks that strix(scientist) need's done in order to get home |
Steel #145791 |
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Posted 1 day ago
interesting. Goldbender was flying to the palace with a smile, on her snout as she thought about the egg, hidden well, in the forest, When she got to a cliff with a waterfall, she smiled as the waterfall split into two, and she readjusted her crown. She landed happily in the cave hidden behind the waterfall, she slowed down and readjusted her crown, she knew that she had some good news. The waterfall split as a hidden mechanism that made the waterfall split, she landed lightly on the cave floor. Two Goldwings approached her. She smiled and went to them, as the smaller of the two was her daughter, Goldie, and the other her husband, Shapebender. As they got close, Shapebender noticed her smile. "Hon, did you..?" He asked in a smooth deep voice. She nods, answering him. "What is it?" Goldie asked, in a silky voice. "Dear, can I have some private time with our daughter?" Shapebender nods. "Sure, I'll be in our private room. He turns and walks over to a door on the opposite side of the entrance of the cave. Goldbender smiled and picked Goldie up. Goldie smiled, then remembered what just happened. "Mother, what does father mean, by… did you..?" she asks. Goldbender started walking to a door on the east side of the cave, to a library. She walked to the portion that only the royal family was allowed. Goldie looked around. "Why, mother, why are we here?" "Because, Dear, you are a big sister." Goldbender said. "What?" Goldie asked, yelling. "Shh, dear, let me explain." Goldbender said. Goldie sighs,as she sits in a chair. "Alright." "Your father asks if I had the egg." Goldbender said. "Oh, I see." she said as a frantic knock sounded on the door. "Come in." The door opens, revealing the knocker. "Shimmer, what are you doing here?" Goldbender asked. "I saw you come in,but your family came before I could." Shimmer said in a low pitched voice. "What is it?" Goldbender asked. Shimmer sighs and looks away. "I can't say it right now, when your daughter is listening, my Queen." "Alright, Goldie, spread the news that you're a sister." Goldie nods, and hops off of the chair. She opens the door. "Bye, mother." she said. "Bye, dear." Goldbender said, waving. She then turns to Shimmer. "What is it Shimmer?" "It has to do with one of our friends and our rivals." Shimmer said. "Which rival?" Goldbender asks. "The Shadowwings." Simmer shivered. "They took an ally." "Who?" goldbender asked. "They took Glow." Shimmer choke out. "Queen Lightbeam's bodyguard?" Goldbender asked. "I could send Goldscale, but he's my personal bodyguard. I could send you to find her, but I can't let my best scout out alone." Shimmer nods. "I think I can find someone who is almost as good as him." she as another knock sounded on the door. "Who is it?" Goldbender asked. The door opens. "Goldvein, what in the seven moons are you doing here?" "I saw, Shimmer walk in and Goldie walking out." Goldstripe said in a soft voice. "So I want to know what is going on.'' Goldbender sighs. "Fine, you can know, but you have to do as Shimmer says, because you are helping her." Shimmer held up a talon, to stop Goldvain from speaking. "Do you know, Glow?" she asks. "Yes, she is Queen's Lightbeam's bodyguard." Goldvain said. "What does this have to do with her?" "She has been captured by the shadowings." Shimmer said. "What, when?" Goldvein's mouth dropped open. "Three days ago." Shimmer said. "I have no other news except when she disappeared." "That's awful." Goldvein said. "It is, though they know what position she holds in the tribe." shimmer said Queen Goldbender spoke"True, they only show themselves in the shadows. That's why they are called shadowwings, as we are called goldwings, because of our golden scales that look like real gold." "My Queen, when do we start?" Shimmer asked. "Now." Queen Goldbender said. Both Goldvein and Shimmer nod, then bow before leaving. After they left Goldbender turned, and walked to a shelf. She pulled a scroll off the self, and opens it. She sits down and took a pen off the table and wrote something in the scroll. Suddenly someone came up behind her and she spun with an elbow. "My, queen, I didn't mean to scare you like that." Shapebender said blocking it. "What do you want, Shapebender?" She asks, breathing hard. "You scared me." "I'm sorry my queen." Shapebender said. "I thought you heard me coming." She chuckled. "When I'm writing?" she asked, then said. "When I'm writing, I'm all in." He nods. "Yes, I should have known." here is the Entro though long but I think it's good. |
Shapeshifter the goldwing #129135 |
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Posted 1 day ago
Great start, Shapeshifter. Those names practically demand you switch to the light side in the end. I can tell project Spring-roll has potential. You should start writing if you haven't already. |
Memer Bear #8777 |
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Posted 1 day ago
ha, you think, I have about 44 pages done, thought I have lots more to do as well. |
Shapeshifter the goldwing #129135 |
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Posted 1 day ago (edited)
Awww thanks!! I've got a brief script but I plan to make it a visual novel, it'll probably be on webtoon or something when I'm finished with the first few page's |
Steel #145791 |
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Posted 1 day ago (edited)
I've lost track of how many pages I have written with all my revisions. Should I share what my story is about in solidarity? |
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