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Private rp between Shapeshifter the goldwing and shroudfang, and the fool

Posted 2024-11-11 11:22:32
#1328849
Just a reminder Shifter, my character will not participate in the current scene
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#37038
Posted 2024-11-11 11:24:26
#1328853
Alright, he's getting her away so he doesn't have to worry about her.
Shapeshifter the goldwing
#129135
Posted 2024-11-11 17:23:59 (edited)
#1329209
Ah'm confused regarding the reply you posted, you not give a name to the individual Longfang ran to and it couldn't be Zelkja since in ShroudFang's reply they wrote down Zelkja was away from the area….and based on how they wrote it, it appears Zelkja was away from the area before the fight had occurred, can you please elaborate on the individual Longfang encountered? If it was apparently Zelkja than it make little sense why yer lad asked if she is alright given she not even know of the event that had unfolded….
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#37038
Posted 2024-11-11 17:30:43
#1329219
oh, yes, sorry it was his sister's killer, who he was fighting even though I forgot his name, Fang I think was his opponent's name. I don't remember, the fight was where she can just hear it though.
Shapeshifter the goldwing
#129135
Posted 2024-11-11 17:34:19
#1329226
I was asking of the individual whom you wrote down as "her" not the killer but thank you for clarifying, ShroudFang's post when they are available should reveal if Zelkja was away from the scene and unable to hear etc. of the fight that had occurred or if we need to create a NPC/side character to serve as the female Longfang is currently speaking to.
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#37038
Posted 2024-11-11 17:41:07
#1329236
I'll re look i'll see what I put and clarify it. i'm tolerably sorry.
Shapeshifter the goldwing
#129135
Posted 2024-11-12 16:29:18
#1330402
I couldn't think of anything else in his state and sorry to make it sad, I tried to think of something else but couldn't.
Shapeshifter the goldwing
#129135
Posted 2024-11-14 17:36:25
#1333010
Sorry the reply is short, I couldn't think of much.
Shapeshifter the goldwing
#129135
Posted 2024-11-14 17:39:04 (edited)
#1333013
There are many ways to improve writing, such as writing your character's thoughts, emotions, pain and the environment they are in. Rather than simply writing actions, can try to write down why they do such actions or how it makes them feel
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#37038
Posted 2024-11-14 17:39:39
#1333017
Thanks and I have to go.
Shapeshifter the goldwing
#129135
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