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Lore Writing Competition (Auction House Clan)

Posted 2024-11-17 21:17:19
Yep! You can only post your lore once, and once there have been enough entries, I'll have the Clan vote

Dynamite1429
#138908

Posted 2024-11-17 21:17:56
Kk~
Auction house update almost done?

Kai
#144779

Posted 2024-11-17 21:18:18
Yep! Just putting in the Tlll's

Dynamite1429
#138908

Posted 2024-11-17 22:08:27 (edited)
As the sun sets over a deep orange horizon a soft cry can be heard from a small den nestled between an old redwoods tree roots. A mother can be heard singing a soft lullaby inside and the cries quiet down as night falls.
Soon the soft chirping of crickets can be heard and hushed voices of something strange. A small adorable white puppy wakes up from inside the den no older than a week noticing its mother is gone and pokes its head outside to see if she's there. 
  It's met with a horrifying sight of wolf hunters with its limp mother at their feet while holding its sibling. Before the weak little pup could do anything the hunters carried the pups family away leaving the puppy to fend for itself. Days pass by and the puppy is barely hanging on. Thin from hunger and weak from thirst.  Soon the pup passes from sheer exhaustion but is denied its death at the gates of Valhalla. It's sent back to its frail body where a spirit sent by the gods takes it to its realm to be raised.
    Years pass in this realm and the pups once bright white coat faded to gray and green due to the illness in the air that prevents most living things from being able to survive. The pups once bright happy eyes dulled and became a vivid green like the strange plants around it that tended to poison the mind.
    The wolf returned to its home realm when it reached the age of two years old. It haunted and disturbed every human it came across never forgiving what they did to it's family. Left it helpless and nameless against all the odds of the world that was completely against it. The horrors this wolf inflicted on mankind was like no other. And to this day this wolf haunts our lands and they are known as Green Whisper….
    and was seen only by those unlucky souls to ever gaze at its sorrowful form only to meet their doom.

Kai
#144779

Posted 2024-11-17 22:11:22
wow, this is good!

Dynamite1429
#138908

Posted 2024-11-17 22:11:48
I had nothing to do and was waiting on update 😗

Kai
#144779

Posted 2024-11-17 22:12:08
Still needs editing but posted it so that I don't accidentally delete it

Kai
#144779

Posted 2024-11-17 22:13:28 (edited)
Any recommendations needed for it?
I feel like I need more paragraphs….

Kai
#144779

Posted 2024-11-17 22:15:28
Also can't sleep bc I don't feel good~

Kai
#144779

Posted 2024-11-18 05:56:33
I like it Kai! That's really good, very spooky, like a story you would tell around a campfire or something
🎄Sage Dino🎄[Hiatus]
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