༺ ℭ𝔥𝔬𝔯𝔢𝔬𝔤𝔯𝔞𝔭𝔥𝔶 ༻ (OOC)

Posted 2022-12-07 18:44:13

#905499

Gah

How do I write coherent stories

Shaking and crying rn since my character dialogue sounds so STRANGE

🔥Bakedfish🐟
#87424

Posted 2022-12-07 18:45:47

#905501

Nah it's fine!!! :o your characters are cool and their thoughts are awesome

AnonymousBirb
#52367

Posted 2022-12-07 18:51:57 (edited)

#905515

Bah.
I don't need compliments, I need criticism.

Edit; never mind, I'll just go look up good writing practices.

🔥Bakedfish🐟
#87424

Posted 2022-12-07 19:06:42

#905541

Baked you are terrible at absolutely everything

AnonymousBirb
#52367

Posted 2022-12-07 20:31:07

#905635

Thank you

🔥Bakedfish🐟
#87424