Rebbystar’s Riveting Records (Writing Shop: Lore & More!) CLOSED ‘TIL FEB
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Posted 2023-04-16 17:51:36
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 Rebbystar #97149 |
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Posted 2023-05-07 09:11:19
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 Dragon Queen🐉 #114325 |
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Posted 2023-05-07 09:11:39
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Rebbystar #97149 |
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Posted 2023-05-16 21:23:33 (edited)
And super sorry this is so long, im bad at keeping things short  Edit: would also like to mention that i'd give you as much time as you need, as i saw you said never more than a week, and i know im asking something kinda big ^^; |
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Posted 2023-05-17 04:08:03
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Rebbystar #97149 |
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Posted 2023-05-17 19:43:19
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YesACreativeName🏳️⚧️ #46900 |
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Posted 2023-05-17 19:50:41
Your order was awesome and I loved working on it. Thank you for leaving this message! It helps a ton. I look forward to any future commissions from you |
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Posted 2023-06-01 11:53:59
Luna was born with a fiery blue flame that was cold yet warm at the same time, and most didn't like her. They shut her out of most activities, but once she grew up, she set off on her own with her mate Tiger to form a new pack. They first settled down in the Riparian Woodlands, but decided to move when they found out that the Mountains were much safer. They had their first two pups, Storm and Shade, but they vanished mysteriously and never returned. They had their second litter soon after, and Luna swore she wouldn't let them out of her sight. As more and more wolves joined them, she found out that the mountains were crawling in puppies and adolescents that she took in from other packs, so she made up her mind and decided to send them traveling. Most left on their own will, but some needed persuasion. And that's where the Tigerfang Pack is to this day. I'm looking for something around 400-500 words, to keep it short, and Luna and Tiger originally came from a pack that was "no-nonsense". They were expected to train hard each day until adulthood, and were assigned a job as soon as they turned a year old, mostly hunting. (if you could add that into the lore that would be great!) The lore is kind of complicated, so I'm just giving you the major details, and not the minor ones. |
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Posted 2023-06-01 12:54:59
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Posted 2023-06-11 16:50:35 (edited)
 ) so i thought id think up some major details but leave the real storytelling and lore crafting to someone who actually knows what theyre doing! im looking for 1-2k words, ill pay for whatever the final word counts ends up being since it seems like you charge 1sc per word. For right now ill pay 1k and pay afterwords if there are any additional words. Lemme know if i need to clarify something or if you are unable to do this commission!These are just random notes i think sound cool that ive written on my den page: Scientific flower names are bestowed upon those who add greater value to the pack Tikqra is a Matriarchy The Matriarch is blessed with a distinct fur, unlike any other wolf in the pack. This color is adapted once they assume the position If a Matriarch is favored by the stars, she shall become everlasting (aka immortal) Heres what i wrote in a random google doc: Erysimum Parviflorum was not always her name, it was gifted to her by the stars. Originally, she was known as Riha. As a pup, she was a gray wolf with flecks of white littering her pelt. On the first full moon after founding the pack, she was gifted her present coat color. The stars speak to her in her sleep, in the form of dreams. They guide her decisions and aid in choosing the next heir. The Matriarch is not chosen because of blood lineage, but rather by their accomplishments and physical traits. It is said that a pup born with green on their fur is a prodigy, excelling at many things. The pack is settled within the mountain ridges, using a forested clearing as their home base. It is about a mile from the nearest water source and 3 miles from the nearest mountain. It is moderately forested. There is no particular hierarchy within the pack, but those with colorful coats are looked up to. Those with colorful coats are always female.The founding Wolves are Erysimum and Lycoris, they were a mated pair before the creation of the pack. It is a custom to gift the Matriarch when she comes to rule, this usually comes in the form of flowers, leaves, or pinecones. Not to sure what other notes to write so i give you complete creative freedom! Editing bc i forgot to mention, idk if this is automatic but id like for this to be written in third person! |
 🍂Yvonne🍂 [SEMI-HIATUS] #82829 |