Need Lore? [Closed]
Posted 2022-12-23 18:47:43 (edited)
Ooooh, that sounds extremely interesting. I would love to write something along those lines. Did you want the twin to be eaten whilst they're still pups as opposed to being in the womb/adulthood? Are there any other major factors you wanted included? Like fights, the parents reacting, the pack as a whole reacting, etc.? Also, how long were you looking for this to be, and were you looking to pay with Base Apps? I'll happily accept that as payment! ^^ I do want to mention that I probably won't get to your comm until after New Years. If you're willing to wait that long, I'd be more than happy to accept this!! There's also a huge chance I'll message you with questions and confirmations on things as I write as well. ^^ Lastly, could you also fill out the form please? ^^ It just keeps everything tidy and helps me learn the character and know exactly what you want from me + payment type + details + more :) |
Karma #75898 |
Posted 2022-12-23 20:19:32 (edited)
Character Name: Katara Character Pronouns: she/her Visual Reference[Required]: Type of Commission: Lore Form of Payment: gc Short Explanation about Character: She's very troubled/mentally unstable in the aggressive sense, and claims to hear voices. Her actions can be unpredictable and she hasn't been known to show others affection. Short Idea/Explanation of what you're looking for: Seeing as she was a twin, and her twin is deceased I just want to take a dark twist on it. She'd have cannibalized her twin while they were still pups, the "voices in her head" told her to do it as to gain her twins strength. Before her cannibalizing her sibling, her sibling was the more liked twin. And this made Katara very jealous. At first the pack wasn't aware as to what had happened to her twin, as they found her at the outskirts of their territory. It wasn't until they found katara and saw her twins blood on her. She was exiled and was found by a dark arts practicing wolf (the story can end off here if need be!) I haven't thought of a name for her twin so i'm completely open with you deciding the twins name/gender. Anything else I may need to know/Extra/Other: nope! |
Corgi #54862 |
Posted 2022-12-23 20:23:00
No worries, it definitely got drowned out at the bottom xD This is actually super exciting and going to be a lot of fun! Do you have a length you want me to stay close to? |
Karma #75898 |
Posted 2022-12-23 20:26:28
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Corgi #54862 |
Posted 2022-12-23 20:29:17
I'll do my best to stay within 2-3 paragraphs! However, the amount of detail will most likely be miniscule. I could always write a longer one (purely because I'm super interested) and a shorter one. If it ends up being too expensive with the longer version, we can go with the shorter one! ^^ I'm just worried that with everything you asked for, I may need around 2 pages~ |
Karma #75898 |
Posted 2022-12-23 20:58:22 (edited)
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Corgi #54862 |
Posted 2023-01-07 12:35:54
Character Pronouns: she/she wolf Visual Reference[Required]: Myla Type of Commission: backstory lore Form of Payment: SC. Short Explanation about Character: Recently entered current pack Riva Glade pack. Personalities: can be sassy, smart, independent, imaginative, has a bit of a lack of self confidence or self-esteem and can be standoffish. Short Idea/Explanation of what you're looking for: lore as in just for her backstory as she may be one of the starting wolves for my Impossible mode challenge. Anything else I may need to know/Extra/Other: She or one of her future pups will be starting my Impossible mode cave challenge. Currently not starting it yet as I want my next lead to have a part in it. |
Amarilla #57044 |
Posted 2023-01-08 17:42:42
Heya! So I'm a bit confused as to what you'd like me to write for her backstory. I'm about to bombard you with questions, I apologize! ^^ Please don't take it in a bad way, I just want to learn as much as I can to do my best! :) I. Do you want me to include her just joining the pack? If so, I. How does the pack treat her? I. Does she have any friends/make any friends? I. Any wolves in particular that might dislike her? I. What's her ranking roughly within the pack? II. What is the Impossible mode challenge/Impossible mode cave challenge? I know you mentioned it's not currently active, but I would need some details to be able to explain it. If Myla is a potential contestant, she'd need it explained to her by another wolf. :) III. Does she have a mate if she has pups? If so III. What is her mate's name? III. What are her pups name's? III. What does her mate and pups look like? There might be more, but I can't think right now. >.< Completed work for @Jackal#75258! [Turn around time, 8 days[sent prior in DMs]; about 1 to 2 hours~ of actual writing time][total words 710]
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Karma #75898 |
Posted 2023-01-09 02:31:17 (edited)
1. The pack treat her warmly as she's taken the place of a former hunting party which got disbanded because a much loved pack member called Penumbra aka Pen died/retired. 1. Her hunting team and the cave den members (Impossible mode cave). She's a finisher and can be a stalker in her hunting team. 1. Nothing yet. 2: Impossible mode project credited by AngryTiger [Item_Hoarder] #10140 my take might tweak the rules if necessary. My breeding projects 3. No mate or pups yet. |
Amarilla #57044 |
Posted 2023-01-09 20:33:55
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✩ͯ•͙͙ Mia •͙͙✩ͯ #80683 |